Now many people think that we are spending too much money and time on protecting wild animals. The money should be better spent on human population. Do you agree or disagree?

With the development of

urbanliazation

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urbanization

,the living spaces and living standards for wild

animals

are decreasing sharply.In order to protect the living environment of wild

animals

and make their living standards more suitable,concerning experts and researchers have been making lots of efforts.In the meanwhile,a bulk of

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oney being spent on it was

neccessary

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necessary

.

However

, another effect that

urbanliazation

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urbanization

brings about is population increasing,the vital issue we are facing with.Quite many

people

urge that we should spend more money on control the increase of population rather than helping wild

animals

.I am fully disagreeable with that kind of opinion. Rewinding back to the time when

people

didn’t

exsist

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exist

.The owner of the whole world are various

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wild

animals

and without

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they could live more freely.After the arrival of

people

,we began to build our

civilazation

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civilization

.In

this

process we were regarding

this

planet

as our home we should have had with dismissing the need

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wild

animals

.We cut the forests wild

animals

relied on to live to install buildings for peoples’ living.Polluting ocean where underseas creatures’ home.What’s worse,now we start to try to forget the existence of wild

animals

,reforming

this

planet

as

people

want with showing no kindness,which is totally out of

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hought of selfishness of human beings.

Besides

,protecting wild

animals

is to protect

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ompetence of creatures' variety.Try to think of if without

animals

only human lives

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this

planet

,how achromatic it would be.Nowadays,blaming on

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rowth of warmness around the world and modern peoples' living style.The fade of wild

animals

is not a tiny issue with getting more and more serious.On the base of the fact that money should be spent on to protect wild

animals

，reducing the expense on it would only push us to counter with the arrival of a time with high-tech level but no

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of creatures' variety. The rapid increase of population is an issue to be settled though,the act of sacrificing the wild

animals

obviously is not a wise approach.Only regarding them as our mates who are living with us on the earth together,

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ife of the

planet

could be prolonged