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Now many people think that we are spending too much money and time on protecting wild animals. The money should be better spent on human population. Do you agree or disagree?

#people #money #time #animals #population
With the development of
urbanliazation
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urbanization
,the living spaces and living standards for wild
animals
 are decreasing sharply.In order to protect the living environment of wild
animals
 and make their living standards more suitable,concerning experts and researchers have been making lots of efforts.In the meanwhile,a bulk of
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oney being spent on it was
neccessary
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necessary
.
However
, another effect that
urbanliazation
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urbanization
 brings about is population increasing,the vital issue we are facing with.Quite many
people
 urge that we should spend more money on control the increase of population rather than helping wild
animals
.I am fully disagreeable with that kind of opinion. Rewinding back to the time when
people
 didn’t
exsist
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exist
.The owner of the whole world are various
of
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wild
animals
 and without
people
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they could live more freely.After the arrival of
people
 ,we began to build our
civilazation
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civilization
.In
this
 process we were regarding
this
planet
 as our home we should have had with dismissing the need
of
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 wild
animals
.We cut the forests wild
animals
 relied on to live to install buildings for peoples’ living.Polluting ocean where underseas creatures’ home.What’s worse,now we start to try to forget the existence of wild
animals
 ,reforming
this
planet
 as
people
 want with showing no kindness,which is totally out of
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hought of selfishness of human beings.
Besides
,protecting wild
animals
 is to protect
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ompetence of creatures' variety.Try to think of if without
animals
 only human lives
in
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this
planet
,how achromatic it would be.Nowadays,blaming on
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rowth of warmness around the world and modern peoples' living style.The fade of wild
animals
 is not a tiny issue with getting more and more serious.On the base of the fact that money should be spent on to protect wild
animals
，reducing the expense on it would only push us to counter with the arrival of a time with high-tech level but no
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 of creatures' variety. The rapid increase of population is an issue to be settled though,the act of sacrificing the wild
animals
 obviously is not a wise approach.Only regarding them as our mates who are living with us on the earth together,
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ife of the
planet
 could be prolonged
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