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Nowadays, not enough students choose science subjects in university in many countries. What are the reasons for this problem? What are the effects on the society?

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In the past century,
science
 has been the most studied subject in universities all around the world.
However
, In recent years, there has been a gradual shift toward other
subjects
 like art and law, and the effects of
this
 shift are concerning for many countries. The exponential growth of
science
 brake throws in the 21st century has resulted in an enormous change in the quality of our lives. Technology and health care are the two most influenced sections of
this
 growth.
However
, most of these
science
 branches have got more and more complicated which makes it more difficult to study and work in these fields.
On the other hand
, other
subjects
 like art and law have not seen much changes over the past decades.
Therefore
,
students
 prefer to study
subjects
 that are not very complicated to learn and in many cases graduated
students
 in
subjects
 other than
science
 have less difficulty finding a job. The declining number of graduate
students
 in
science
subjects
 can cause negative effects on society. Many countries rely on exporting technology equipment rather than oil and gas and many other countries want to become self-sufficient in those technologies.
Therefore
, they have to train enough
students
 for their projected needs in the future.
In other words
, the advancement of a society highly depends on the number of researchers and scholars in their academic environment. In conclusion, the
ifficulty
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difficulty
 of studying
science
subjects
 in universities has caused a shift in
students
 willing to study these topics and the effects of
this
 change will get worst over time as not enough researchers are available for the technological needs of the society.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • deter
  • promotion
  • opportunities
  • role models
  • lucrative
  • employment
  • gender stereotypes
  • societal norms
  • access to information
  • technological stagnation
  • shortage
  • skilled professionals
  • innovation
  • healthcare sector
  • workforce
  • global competitiveness
  • advancements
  • economic growth
  • public health services
  • environmental sciences
  • combat climate change
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