Government investment in the arts, such as music and theatre, is a waste of money. Government must invest this in public services instead. Do you agree or disagree?

Government supporting arts
such
as music and cinemas financially more than other public services provided in
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ation.
However
, some believe that investment in entertainment industry
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less important than public service.
Therefore
, it is agreed that authorities must us these funds to consolidate local services
instead
. The need
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improvements
such
as medical and
education
facilities yet to be advanced will prove
this
.
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, no doubt
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overnment have achieved significant improvement in
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edical field if we compare it with
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ast decade. But, still
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some infrastructures have not been improved at
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xpected level
for instance
several cities are still lack of hospitals, dispensaries, and ambulance for locals where financial support more crucial than recreational activities.
Thus
, local authorities should raise their awareness in advancing these facilities than wasting money on arts that people even do not need them.
Secondly
, some part having luxury
education
support while poorer province doesn’t.
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to reach
in
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every corner of the city so every student can acquire one.
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overnment should establish more schools and provide all the basic requirement, so
instead
of only focusing on growing cinemas they should develop more tuition
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. In summary,
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ntertainment industry would not bring any benefits to those who are suffering due to under-developed facilities in their local areas and if children would not get access to proper
education
they will for sure face unemployment which will directly impact on county economy.
Although
, music and cinemas can
also
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overnment’s investment
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they should put their higher priorities on local services.
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