Some people think that in order to deal with the problem of congestion in cities, privately owned vehicles should be banned in city centers, while others consider this to be an unrealistic solution. Discuss both sides and give your opinion.

Congestion in

citities

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cities

has been an argument issue and should be the foremost consideration. Some people think that

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is because of the increasing

number

of

cars

, and others think it is not the only reason. I am of the belief that

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vehicles

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a ubiquitous reason for the traffic jam,

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overnment can mitigate

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issue

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several ways.

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essay will discuss both views. On one hand, people argue that

cars

should be prohibited for two main reasons.

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, proponents claim that if the

number

of vehicles

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,

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will free

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space in the streets. To explain,if the people who work in the same corporation go together to work in one car, the

number

of vehicles will decrease.

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, nowadays there are ample applications, which can connect individuals

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ork in the same area.

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ehicle is the chief culprit for pollution; it emits carbon dioxide, which pollutes the air.

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there are various causes

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global warming, the carbon dioxide emission from

cars

is the main contributing factor. On the other

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, the are two realistic methods to tackle

this

problem. To start with, authorities should

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renew

the infrastructure of streets .

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means that, if governments modify the infrastructure of streets, they will be able to widen the roads.

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it costs a fortune, authorities can build a new ring road. To illustrate, when a new ring road is built it will take a large

number

of

cars

. In conclusion, despite the

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forementioned

oft-mentioned

reason for banning

cars

. I would like to restate my opinion that the problem of traffic jam can be

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countered

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by other ways, as widening the roads and building new ring roads.