Some people think that in order to deal with the problem of congestion in cities, privately owned vehicles should be banned in city centers, while others consider this to be an unrealistic solution. Discuss both sides and give your opinion.

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has been an argument issue and should be the foremost consideration. Some people think that
this
is because of the increasing
number
of
cars
, and others think it is not the only reason. I am of the belief that
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vehicles
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a ubiquitous reason for the traffic jam,
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overnment can mitigate
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issue
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several ways.
This
essay will discuss both views. On one hand, people argue that
cars
should be prohibited for two main reasons.
Firstly
, proponents claim that if the
number
of vehicles
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,
this
will free
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space in the streets. To explain,if the people who work in the same corporation go together to work in one car, the
number
of vehicles will decrease.
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, nowadays there are ample applications, which can connect individuals
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ork in the same area.
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,
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ehicle is the chief culprit for pollution; it emits carbon dioxide, which pollutes the air.
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there are various causes
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global warming, the carbon dioxide emission from
cars
is the main contributing factor. On the other
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, the are two realistic methods to tackle
this
problem. To start with, authorities should
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the infrastructure of streets .
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means that, if governments modify the infrastructure of streets, they will be able to widen the roads.
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,
however
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it costs a fortune, authorities can build a new ring road. To illustrate, when a new ring road is built it will take a large
number
of
cars
. In conclusion, despite the
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reason for banning
cars
. I would like to restate my opinion that the problem of traffic jam can be
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by other ways, as widening the roads and building new ring roads.

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