Nowadays, not enough students choose science subjects in university in many countries. What are the reasons for this problem? What are the effects on the society?

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It is true, the majority of

students

are losing interest in

science

for

further

studies in most of the countries. If I say

Science

is a beautiful

subject

to understand but It wouldn’t be wrong if I

also

say that beauty always comes with dark thoughts.

Science

has many aspects to understand. Complex theories, formulas, and Difficult calculations make

science

bit more complicated as it sounds. May be due to the complexity of the

subject

students

are losing their interest in

this

domain. There might be some other reasons

also

students

are not patient enough to observe or realize what is happening around them. If they find something magical natural phenomenon, they browse it on the internet and easily get an answer which kills their curiosity to dig deeper. Most of the people do not want to dig deeper on the

subject

/ matter, thanks to digital platform and availability of content easily. Indeed, it is a great loss for society. I am afraid, if things go like

this

, we won’t be able to find brainy scientists or professors in the future. Someway or the other society has to understand that

students

need a catalyst to find a

subject

interesting.

This

could only be achievable, if certain steps have taken by government and college higher authorities in regards to making

students

understand the value of studying

science

. Society needs more intellectuals and supporter of

science

to maintain harmony in the natural and civil arena.

Also

, needs to cut down college fees to praise

science

lovers and let’s not restrict them anyways to become a better

science

enthusiast.

Submitted by Leena Kapoor on Wed Jan 13 2021

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