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Some people think that women should not be allowed to work in police force ? Do u agree or disagree ?

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Gender discrimination was a big issue in the past and even today.
Moreover
, in
this
 essay, I will disagree with the statement given;
women
 should not be in the same job that intended for men.
To begin
 with, equality in humans choice of career and interest is accepted nowadays, many
women
 are working as engineers, lawyers, serving in military and capable to compete with other men.
For instance
, in the history of India, when the
first
woman
 who became an airforce officer, at
first
 men couldn't accept it, they thought
this
woman
 will get scared and just cry in the battle, they are afraid that the manly side of a man will get overpower with
an
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a
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woman
.
Instead
, she showed them that she can handle pressure and got awarded in her accomplishments. She just wanted to pursue her dream as a pilot.
Secondly
, to serve in our country is honourable work, especially being the peacemaker in the society,
furthermore
,
women
 police officer has the capacity to relate to the
women
 suspect or victims, they can communicate well and gentle, to handle difficult situations.
For example
, if there is a kid who robs a store and took hostages inside, a
woman
 officer could negotiate as she relates or understands him like a mother or sister.
On the other hand
, many think that girl police could get too emotional and can't stand in the time of pressure, mostly, when it terms of family. Sometime, her decision will fluctuate and consider things dangers for everyone. To conclude, if gents can do the job
nevertheless
,
also
,the ladies can. We will never underestimate the capacity of the strength of a
woman
.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • inherent equality
  • law enforcement
  • empathy
  • gender-based violence
  • community relations
  • diversity
  • team performance
  • systemic gender bias
  • physical requirements
  • culture of masculinity
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