In many places, new homes are needed, but the only space available for building them is in the countryside. Some people believe that it is more important to protect the countryside and not build new homes there. What is your opinion about this ?

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new homes for a living. Nowadays cities are crowded so people are moving

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to find space to build homes. On contrary, many believe that the

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should be spared and one should not start constructing houses there. In my opinion, I agreeing with leaving the

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if it is not the

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option left. With ever-increasing demand

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building home caused crowded areas in cities.

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, there are only a few places left to construct a house. To illustrate, City like Mumbai has no room for new buildings.

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type of scenario forced

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ommunity to find more place.

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opulation shifted to the

countryside

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to build houses.

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creates a problem for the ecosystem there. Because of human interference, wildlife and forest area affect drastically. Many animals are hunted and many forests are destroyed by cutting trees.

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mindless hunting and deforestation create many problems for our environment. Disturbed rainy season in

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five years is an example of it. According to me, It is essential to protect the

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should take steps to prevent these precious sites.

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, on an individual level,one can contribute by choosing to live in

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eparate bungalow. By

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effort,we can minimize the demand for new places.

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, the government

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could take part in it by proving

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arge multi-storey building for cheaper rates. The government could

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declare some areas as a sanctuary or national park to prevent them from disappearing. To conclude, It is understandable to need for space for houses, but in my opinion, if we all combine our effort and strength

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we definitely can prevent rural area.