Last Wednesday you flew from London to Vancouver. When you arrived home, you discovered that you had left your hand luggage on the plane. Write a letter to the airline. In your letter, you should explain: • where and when you lost your bag • what your bag looks like • what its contents were

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Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing to you with regards to a query about lost properties. On the 2nd January 2021, I onboarded

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flight CA121 with your airlines from London to Vancouver. When the plane landed at 5.oo pm local time at Vancouver Airport, I was very excited about coming back

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after a year of study at London Business School and completely lost my mind regarding my hand luggage in the overhead compartment. It is a black Dell branded backpack with my name tag attached to the zipper on the top pocket. As I recently purchased the bag from my university store, the shop has emailed me for warranty purposes, and I can produce the receipt for your reference if required. There are some valuable items in the bag, including a Dell Inspiration 500 black laptop, one Dell charger, a back headphone by Sony, a pen drive and a black diary with a pen in the pocket. The gadgets are not only valuable in terms of monetary value but due to my course works, research, analysis and presentations. I hope you would take

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matter seriously and consider my situation favourably. Would you kindly return my items to

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home address that I provided during the reservation? I am

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happy to pay any postage fees once you confirm my belongings. Thank you very much. Yours faithfully, John Smith

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