Some people think that modern technology is making people more sociable while others think that it is making them less sociable. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

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education
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is the
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stage before the starting of career, many people believe that it prepares
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for employment only, but the fact is that it serves a lot many purposes. In
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essay I shall discuss the various functions of a
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and how helps the
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to become successful in
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life . Universities provide specialised
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in fields
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as medical, engineering, commerce etc. They provide library facilities, which support the curriculum. They provide laboratory facilities for science and
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subjects. They send
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to factories and industries so that they get practical experience.
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job-oriented training helps them to understand the working conditions and
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gives them an idea about competition in the market. They will have the chance to gain real experience and learn practical skills related to their chosen profession.
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may lead to promotions and a successful career.
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, it is
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understandable that many
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choose to continue their studies.
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, the job market is becoming increasingly competitive and needs qualified workers , and sometimes there are hundreds of applicants for one position in a company. Young people who do not have qualifications from a
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or college may not be able to compete. with others but
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there are
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can create self-made projects which can
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them to take a position in a company. In conclusion, there are convincing arguments for starting work straight after school, but higher
education
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can
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lead to a successful career.there are can be no doubt that
education
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is a path which leads on more opportunities but
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famous entrepreneurs built empires without
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niversity degree
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • online marketplaces
  • mobile payment options
  • personalized advertising
  • accessibility
  • compare prices
  • decision fatigue
  • impulse buying
  • financial imprudence
  • privacy and data security
  • transformed
  • streamlined
  • user-friendly
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