Nowadays we are producing more and more rubbish. Why do you think this is happening? What can governments do to help reduce the amount of rubbish produced?

Owing to the growing population, fast and easy way of lifestyle resulting in
people
to neglect the rubbish
that is
left behind, especially
plastic
waste
. Though many countries have
waste
management system it is
people
's responsibility to dump the
waste
properly to the desired places under
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orrect way and limit the same.
Usage
of
plastic
items,
such
as
plastic
bags
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excessive in the recent years
where in
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many countries there
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no control measures when it comes to the
usage
of
single
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use
plastics
which is hard to destroy and cannot be recycled.
People
are used to it to rely on shops and hypermarkets for
carry
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bags
which are mostly
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use
plastics
and without any limitations. Cheap
plastics
are used nowadays for almost in all products to meet common day to day life requirements. Government regulatory bodies should impose stringent rules restricting the
usage
of
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use
plastics
in shops, commercial
centers
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and insist public to bring their own carry
bags
.
Also
, to make
easy
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available of dustbins on all around the public places where garbage are piled up. Import of pollutant cargoes should be screened strictly by the appropriate ministries which will reduce the wastage. Recycling facilities to be built in multiple locations. I have been in Oman for six years and for the past six years there was no restriction in
usage
of
single
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use
plastic
bags
. In fact,
this
became a culture that
people
never tend to carry their own
bags
for shopping and rely on these shops. The same carry bag is used for domestic garbage disposals leading to
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junk of
plastics
wastes.
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year, Oman government imposed a law that
single
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use
plastic
should not be used or distributed across the country.
This
is indeed a great move and should be followed by
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est of the world in view to save the world and
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future. Hereby, I conclude that it is
also
an individual's responsibility to avoid
usage
of goods that are non-
recycleable
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recyclable
and to adhere a proper
waste
disposal etiquette.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • consumerism
  • disposable culture
  • over-packaging
  • non-recyclable
  • public awareness
  • waste management
  • environmental impact
  • recycle
  • recycling facilities
  • waste separation
  • single-use products
  • infrastructure
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