You have been invited to attend an interview for a place studying a course in a college. Unfortunately because of a previous appointment you cannot come at the time they wish. Write a letter to the admissions tutor and explain your position. Apologise and offer to come on another day or later the same day. Ask also how long the interview will be and whether there will be any tests during it.

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Dear Sir,

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, please accept my apology because of a previous appointment I could not come at the

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you wish. I am really sorry about wasting

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and efforts which your team took for that session. Each

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I do spend a lot of

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while dealing with

study

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. For me

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hols an important human value. Actually, on the same

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, I am busy with

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doctor's

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appointment

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because my mother is unwell. It is equally important to meet a

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. I firmly believe that it

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responsibility but due to

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situation I am feeling helpless. Can I suggest another

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for an

interview

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? In the

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, I will

completely

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available. Please let me know about

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will be carrying during the

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at a great level. Even though

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changes and students do vary in their opinions I think only positive efforts can bring more benefits. You can contact me at any

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. Once again please accept my sorry. Each

day

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I do spend a lot of

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while dealing with

study

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. For me

study

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hols an important human value. Actually, on the same

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, I am busy with

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doctor's

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a doctor's

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appointment

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appointments

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because my mother is unwell. It is equally important to meet a

doctor

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. I firmly believe that it

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is my

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responsibility but due to

this

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situation I am feeling helpless. Can I suggest another

day

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for an

interview

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? In the

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week

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, I will

completely

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be completely

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available. Please let me know about

tests

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the tests

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which

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that

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will be carrying during the

interview

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This

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week

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I mostly

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apply

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suffer stress

issue

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issues

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at a great level. Even though

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changes and students do vary in their opinions I think only positive efforts can bring more benefits. You can contact me at any

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. Once again please accept my sorry. Look forward to seeing you. Yours faithfully, Kailash Kamble.

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‘Complex’ sentences are not actually very complex; they are just two or more simple sentences put together. Putting them together makes the essay more coherent and cohesive.

Examples:

I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

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Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

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317 words

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