In some countries children have very strict rules of behavior, in other countries they are allowed to do almost anything they like. To what extent should children have to follow rules?

It is often believed that
children
ought to follow stringent
rules
according to their cultural traditions, while some ponder that they should be permitted to enjoy liberty in their young age and allowed to behave freely.
Although
disliked by most, I strongly agree
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the former notion that
children
should be bought up with some
rules
and restrictions to make them behave well and develop a disciplined personality. On the one hand, it is believed that young ones should be given
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reedom to behave the way they desire.
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a liberal and
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as a fuel for creativity and imagination which allows the
children
to explore their own world rather than walking on the path being taught by elders. To illustrate
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stars, stand-up comedians, and successful artists in the country belongs to
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arefree background;
hence
, If benefits of free parenting are considered, imaginative skills and creativity top the list.
On the other hand
, I believe that
children
who are encouraged to follow the traditional
rules
tend to develop a better code of conduct and a constructive personality.
This
is because those young minds receive guideline at each step of their conduct and abide by
rules
told by their parents and peers;
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Japanese
children
are taught to behave strictly according to their cultural norms.
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apanese are known for their disciplines and courtesy all over the world.
Therefore
, rigid traditional and cultural values tend to have more benefits for young minds. To conclude, it is frequently believed that
children
should enjoy their freedom and should not be bought up in
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trict environment, while others and I myself is in favour of strict parenting. As strict principals are
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ource of discipline, rendering the youth to become more well-mannered and decently-behaving.
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