Managing global environmental issues should be handled by one organization on a global scale. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Green issues are arising

world-wide

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at an alarming rate, and

this

type of situations had not witnessed in past times. To solve these

challanges

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challenges

, many may say that an entity must be developed at an international level where every country takes part as a representative. I partially agree with the given notion since

this

planing has negatives as well as

positivies

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positives

positive

. Fundamentally, some factors

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a

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gree with the presented argument, and there are several reasons to substantiate.

Firstly

, with the

collabration

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collaboration

of every nation,

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environmental concerns would be lowered and improved to some extent. It is

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evident

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that the

team work

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always gives a positive outcome,

therefore

the international organization as a team of

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hole world would

gives

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better result and ideas to overcome

such

problems.

Secondly

, poor nations can participate with lower funds and can get better facilities. As developing countries do not have enough budget to invest

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ecological problems, but as a representative

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they would get enormous support.

Nevertheless

, there are some points that

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disagree with the notion. Chiefly, developing an organization at an international level requires both a lot of money and time. In order to stand

such

e

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ntity, the engagement of each nation is

necessay

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necessary

. Without the participation of a single nation, the firm would not work properly at the given aim and collapse eventually.

Moreover

, the chance of inequality and discrimination is more because

such

organizations only stand with rich and develop countries at the time of crises and leave poorer behind.

This

type of

behaviou

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behaviour

is

prominant

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prominent

why many

firm

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closed in recent times. In conclusion,

although

developing a group at the world level would decrease the ecological challenges virtually, there are some drawbacks that would become

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anger for

such

type of group.

Hence

, I partially agree with the solution given. Though I

also

think

this

body would

works

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better if managed effectively.