Nowadays, as women and men have to work full-time household duties should be equally divided. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
In
this
modern era, both men and women contribute their full time for
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to
work
for the betterment of the family. Some people opine that they should divide their household
activities equally. I am in consummate accord with this
not and I also
believe that there are some better ways to deal with housework rather than dividing task
equally.
Apparently, there are some advantages to dividing Fix the agreement mistake
tasks
household
activities at
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the
top of Correct article usage
apply
that
is
it Unnecessary verb
apply
increase
mutual understanding between couples. To be precise, if labour is equally divided between them, it will tend to reduce their workload. To epitome, if all Correct subject-verb agreement
increases
household
responsibility is put on one person, it will increase the level of their stress and anxiety. Likewise
, equal division of domestic work
could help to develop mutual bonding between partners and there will be fewer chances of the occurrence any of consequences and arguments between them.
Furthermore
, there are some other better ways to handle household
duties instead
of trying to divide task
equally. Fix the agreement mistake
tasks
Firstly
, it is quite difficult for both genders to divide their work
as they work
full time
. Add a hyphen
full-time
That is
why many families hire housemaids to get relief from their domestic work
. This
will not only help reduce their work
but also
tend to increase their bonds as they would spend their time with children. Secondly
, parents ask their children to be responsible for household
duties. For instance
, if children will
understand their responsibilities at Verb problem
apply
young
age, they will not Add an article
a young
faced
any Change the verb form
face
complication
in future.
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complications
To conclude
, although
domestic chore
should be shared evenly between men and women, they could seek help from other people as their counterparts have equal responsibility toward their house.Fix the agreement mistake
chores
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