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Nowadays, as women and men have to work full-time household duties should be equally divided. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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In
this
 modern era, both men and women contribute their full time
for
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work
 for the betterment of the family. Some people opine that they should divide their
household
 activities equally. I am in consummate accord with
this
 not and I
also
 believe that there are some better ways to deal with housework rather than dividing
task
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 equally. Apparently, there are some advantages to dividing
household
 activities
at
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it
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 mutual understanding between couples. To be precise, if labour is equally divided between them, it will tend to reduce their workload. To epitome, if all
household
 responsibility is put on one person, it will increase the level of their stress and anxiety.
Likewise
, equal division of domestic
work
 could help to develop mutual bonding between partners and there will be fewer chances of the occurrence any of consequences and arguments between them.
Furthermore
, there are some other better ways to handle
household
 duties
instead
 of trying to divide
task
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 equally.
Firstly
, it is quite difficult for both genders to divide their
work
 as they
work
full time
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.
That is
 why many families hire housemaids to get relief from their domestic
work
.
This
 will not only help reduce their
work
 but
also
 tend to increase their bonds as they would spend their time with children.
Secondly
, parents ask their children to be responsible for
household
 duties.
For instance
, if children
will
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understand their responsibilities at
young
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 age, they will not
faced
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 any
complication
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 in future.
To conclude
,
although
 domestic
chore
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 should be shared evenly between men and women, they could seek help from other people as their counterparts have equal responsibility toward their house.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • gender equality
  • shared responsibility
  • harmonious living arrangements
  • traditional gender roles
  • modern values
  • domestic chores
  • relationship satisfaction
  • positive example
  • household duties
  • full-time workforce
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