you have recently stated work in a new company. write a letter o a friend . in your letter explain why you changed the job, describe your new job and tell some other news.

Dear Stacy, I hope

this

finds you and your lovely family well.I am really sorry that I was not able to connect with you recently because of my office work. I am writing now to let you know about my new job. Do you remember that I was working for a telecommunication company? Well,I got fed up with that job.

However

I was working so long hours, the pay was not good .Honestly saying that the office environment was not as much good as I expected. So I started applying for new jobs and I am so excited to inform you that, I joined one construction company a month back. The company's work culture is really good , all my colleagues and my manager are so supportive.

Furthermore

, the pay lies

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my expected salary range. Anyway, I have to stop now because my sister and her 2 years old daughter came here to stay with me for a few days. She sends you a lot of love with a lovely message that when can we all meet up again. I hope , very soon. With love Pragna

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3Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
0Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
1Grammar mistakes
 

5 paragraphs

188 words

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 8.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 5.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

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Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

Essentional vocabulary list for IELTS Writing 7+

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