A lot of places in the world rely on tourism as a main source of income. Unfortunately, tourism can also be a source of problems if it is not manage correctly. Describe the merits and demerits of tourism in the world. Do you think that benefits of tourism outweigh it's drawbacks.

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Jestin [1/18, 7:11 PM] Anumon🤗: V had a little fyt..

Athu

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tension karanam avakk patanillaa [1/18, 7:11 PM] Anumon🤗: Pinne kurach vere pblms too [1/18, 7:11 PM] Anumon🤗: So I sd I wanna take her for councelling [1/18, 7:12 PM] Anumon🤗: Onningy

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Athu

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Then

if the doc wants... I will go

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Athu

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njn

ittech povualla aunty.. I tuk

this

risk cz I want her to get help [1/18, 7:13 PM] Anumon🤗: Help

enn

paranja.. Medical help venam [1/18, 7:14 PM] Anumon🤗:

Athu

ninku repeated aayi

njn

illel chavum

enn

parayanondannu

paranju

njn

[1/18, 7:14 PM] Anumon🤗: She

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enn

paranju

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[1/18, 7:15 PM] Anumon🤗: Pinne she told me she ll say to Acha

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Njn

paranju

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Njn

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enn

[1/18, 7:17 PM] Anumon🤗: Ithinte half.. Thaazhe vech

paranju

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[1/18, 7:17 PM] Anumon🤗: Ennit

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this

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This

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njn

ingne vann nikkane

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The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

Summary
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Prediction or recommendation

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To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

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In conclusion
To conclude
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Finally
In a nutshell
In general

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A lot of places in the world rely on tourism as a main source of income. Unfortunately, tourism can also be a source of problems if it is not manage correctly. Describe the merits and demerits of tourism in the world. Do you think that benefits of tourism outweigh it's drawbacks.

Include an introduction and conclusion

Essentional vocabulary list for IELTS Writing 7+

Some people believe that international trade and communication with other countries is a positive trend, while others think it is harmful to nations and they might lose their identities. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

Computer games are very popular for all ages and nationalities. Parents think this has little educational value and it will be harmful for children. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

It is better to run your own business than to work for someone else. To what extent do yo agree or disagree?

In their advertising, businesses nowadays usually emphasise that their products are new in some way. Why is this? Do you think it is a positive or negative development?