A friend of yours is thinking of going on a camping holiday for the first time this summer. He/she has asked for your advice. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter • Explain why you think your friend would enjoy a camping holiday. • Describe some possible disadvantages. • Say whether you would like to go camping with your friend this summer.

Dear Maulik, I hope you are doing well. I got your letter a few days ago. I am happy to know that you are going to attend your
first
camping. I am writing
this
letter to give you some tips which can help with camping. As I know, you will love your
first
camping as you are always adventurous and like to experiment
new
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things in life. Camping
usually
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held at places which are full of scenery and you will have a chance to admire
beauty
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of nature. Apart from
this
also
give you an opportunity to meet new people and make new friends. On the other side, there are a few cons of camping. You might find it difficult to stay in the camp in a forest due to mosquitos and other insects. Another disadvantage is loneliness. To overcome that I suggest you join
in
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a group or with friends. Well, I really like to join you in your
first
camping but that cannot possible due to excessive pending work in my job.
Additionally
, I recently switched my job, so it is not wise to take early leave as it creates a negative impression of mine. I hope you forgive me for that. warm regards,
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Examples:

I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • adventure
  • serenity
  • outdoors
  • refreshing
  • hustle and bustle
  • inherent
  • foster
  • distractions
  • cost-effective
  • unpredictable
  • wildlife
  • adequate preparation
  • physical demands
  • researching
  • campsite
  • lasting memories
  • mutual interests
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