Some people think that the responsibility should be on the government for the rise of obesity in children, others think that the parents should be in control instead. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
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In a nutshell,I must say that either this
the duty of government
to control obesity by taking some action but parents
play povit role.They should encourage their kids to eat food
which is full of nutrients otherwise
this
negligency will bring catastrophic outcomes not only for the young nation but also
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