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With the improvements in today’s health care, society has to care for more and more elderly people. Do you feel that society will be able to cope with the increase in numbers of elderly people today and how can it be managed? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

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Nowadays, most of the hospitals are
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 hospital which
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atmost
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utmost
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 care and services with the help of technology. It is irrefutable that due to the advancement of technology in
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edical sector, every nation has to care numerous aged
people
. In the following paragraphs, I intend to discuss the reasons and
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solutions
 for the given notion. The majority of aged
people
 are either
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a
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wheel chair
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.
Although
 there are
people
 who can do day to day activities themself, most of them have long term illness.
However
,
such
people
 are managed by their children or any nursing staff. Apparently, there are nursing homes and old age homes focused on
such
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individuals
 in some
cties
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cities
.
For instance
, in India
people
 are afraid to send their aged parents to
such
 places thinking what the society will say but it is always better to leave them there and be in contact with them regularly. In my opinion, society must be capable of managing
such
 situations by constructing more nursing homes, improving the facilities of current old age centres and
also
 with the help of the government. To summarise,
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apid pace of technology in
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ealthcare industry has resulted in the increase of life span for the majority of humans on earth. Unfortunately , society finds it difficult to manage
people
 with severe illness,
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disabilities
.
Therefore
, it is better to have suitable places for
people
 with same kind disorders.
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