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Today more and more tourists are visiting places where conditions are difficult, such as the Sahara desert or the Antarctic? What are the benefits and disadvantages of this?

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 of the widely discussed issues nowadays is extremal tourism to different parts of our planet. It is undeniable that tourism has become an essential part of our life.
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extraordinary men. Surely, there are both pros and cons for uncommon tourism but I believe benefits overweight disadvantages. One of the main positives of travelling to extremal zones is that a human can check himself for character, perseverance and adaptability in various conditions.
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, to fly across an
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 costs 500USD but to sail across an
ocean
 is invaluable. Another advantage of visiting of the Sahara desert, Antarctic or other dangerous places is
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xit from the comfort zone. Modern
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 live in <greenhouse conditions>. If we cannot check ourselves, we will not know our abilities. A good example here is Phedor Konyuhov, the most famous
traveler
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 in Russia, who has visited the Antarctic, has
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 by balloon across the Atlantic
ocean
, has sailed on canoe across the same
ocean
. He demonstrates
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us that
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apabilities of a human are boundless, and it only depends on our meaning. Turning to the other side of the argument, visiting of the extremal areas are dangerous for life or for
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ealth of
people
. Obviously, high temperature and
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 humidity in the Sahara desert or low temperature and
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 pressure in the Antarctic influence for a human organism. I know a lot of occasions when
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rice of that travel. Choosing
this
 kind of route we should find out not just safe equipment, we have to think
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our actions in emergency cases. Some
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conomy for outfits and get many
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 during their expedition. Having weighed everything mentioned up, we can come to a conclusion that once in a life every person has to check himself but only after appropriate training. 313
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