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the amounts of waste produced by three companies over a period of 15 years. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant

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The given graph illustrates the quantities of waste in
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 generated by three companies A,
B
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 and
C
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 in a 15 years span from 2000 to 2015. Overall, it is clear that though amounts of waste produced by
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 A and
B
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 fell, it increased significantly by
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C
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. The garbage produced by the
company
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 A in the year 2000 was 12
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 that remained 8
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 in 2015;
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,
this
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 for industry
B
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 was 8
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 in the beginning and it increased to 10
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 in 2005 before declined sharply to 3 and it was the lowest figure among all produced garbage by any of them.
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,
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C
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 was the lowest producer of waste in 2000 at 4
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 and it produced 10
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 in 2015 and interestingly it was the highest producer of rubbish in that year in all three companies. In 2010, rubbish production by two companies
B
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 and
C
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 was the same at 7
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.
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, a reversal in the trend was observed.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • trend
  • fluctuation
  • significant changes
  • increase
  • decrease
  • waste production
  • period
  • compare
  • analyze
  • main features
  • highlight
  • decline
  • rise
  • steady
  • variations
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