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You have lost your student identification card. This has created some problems for you. Write a letter to the director of student services. In your letter • advise them of your situation • explain how this is affecting you • request a new card

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Dear Mr Hudson, I am writing to you with regards to a pressing situation of mine. Unfortunately, I have lost my
student
 identification
card
 yesterday while travelling to the university by bus. I was listening to the class lecture on my mobile and must have misplaced my ID
card
 unintentionally.
However
, I have reported the incident to the lost property office of Transport NSW as soon as I realised
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 the university bus stop. Being a
full time
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student
 at an educational institution, I am eligible to buy tickets at public transport at a discounted rate but I need to display my
student
card
 each time I make the purchase. As I did not have the ID copy with me today, I had to get the ticket at a regular price.
Such
 additional
expense
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 will create
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financial distress to my monthly budget. Could you please approve the attached application urgently for issuing a new
student
card
? I will be eternally grateful to you for your assistance. Thank you for your consideration. Sincerely, John Smith
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Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

You should use complex sentences in your writing, but it does not mean that you should try to make all of our sentences complex.

‘Complex’ sentences are not actually very complex; they are just two or more simple sentences put together. Putting them together makes the essay more coherent and cohesive.

Examples:

I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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