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Some people think it’s better to choose friends who always have the same opinions as them. Other people believe it’s good to have friends who sometimes disagree with them. Discuss both these view and give your own opinion

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ery important relationship in everyone’s
life
 at every stage of your age. In our society
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we live in a way that every individual has so many
friends
 since their childhood. Thoughts of many of them are matching with our, So they will become best
friends
 for
life
 long and others are just as
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artner due to discussion are not matched with each other. Discuss both the viewpoints. Colleague
opinion
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 same apartment so their thought process should always be like as you. There are so many decision making examples like money spent on household things, gadgets purchased and other stuff.
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 if there thinking is not up to the mark with each other so in
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conflict arises and
that is
 lead to a big problem in future. Thinking should be aligned with your partner if they run a joint venture because a vision of the company should be understood by the entire employer and employee while running a business. The same thought process is very important for a successful venture. If the
opinion
 does not correlate with each other so there may be a chance for the losses and shutting down the venture. Sometimes
friends
 with a different
opinion
 are always better because they show you the other side of the picture and it does not mean if they have an opposite
opinion
 it is not a good partner. In
life
,there are many situations where we need to understand both viewpoints. In conclusion, for
life
,both kinds of
friends
 are important to understand the situations and to know the world better. There should be loyalty between them while taking the decision.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • harmonious
  • stress-free
  • disagreements
  • conflicts
  • reinforce
  • validate
  • comforting
  • reassuring
  • broaden your understanding
  • perspectives
  • challenge intellectually
  • think critically
  • personal growth
  • development
  • healthy debates
  • communication skills
  • mutual respect
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