Human activities have negative effects on plant and animal species. Some people think it is too late to do anything about this problem. Others believe that effective measure can be taken to improve this situation. Discuss both views and give our opinion

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Presently, several
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do a lot of
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, but
activities
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that
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do have serious consequences to
plants
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and animal species. Some
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believe that it is so late to solve anything.
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, other
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think that effective standard can reduce
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problem. From my point of view,
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situation is not late to solve
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effect. On the one hand, more and more
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like to do a lot of
activities
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, and it affects in bad ways on
plants
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and animals, so some
people
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say it is very late to resolve
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effect because human have many daily routines and some families hunting to sell.
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, the family have
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camping, and they build
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amp near the forest. There are
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like hunting, fishing or lighting a fire. Every activity affects
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animals and
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because hunting and fishing, they must
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kill animals that they can catch.
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, several
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have a job
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as hunters, fishmongers and carpenters, so it is impossible that
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can solve
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trouble.
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is a reason why human think that it is too late to solve problems.
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, others argue that if governments have a
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,
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will do and it can solve
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trouble because every
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always
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punishments
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if
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do not do in measure.
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, in the city, has many problems about economic, so governments establish some rules to improve
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situation, and some cities if
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break a
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, they will not only paid much money but
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imprison too, so a large group of
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afraid about punishments, they follow a
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and
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method makes
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problem gone.
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,
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is the reason why
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think that if they have an effective standard, they will do
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situation better than before. To sum up, many
activities
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have negative ways in economics like
plants
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and animal species. Human thinks that they can not solve anything, but others argue that if they have a strong position and
rule
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, they will improve
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effect.
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