Human activities have negative effects on plant and animal species. Some people think it is too late to do anything about this problem. Others believe that effective measure can be taken to improve this situation. Discuss both views and give our opinion

Presently, several
people
do a lot of
activities
, but
activities
that
people
do have serious consequences to
plants
and animal species. Some
people
believe that it is so late to solve anything.
However
, other
people
think that effective standard can reduce
this
problem. From my point of view,
this
situation is not late to solve
this
effect. On the one hand, more and more
people
like to do a lot of
activities
, and it affects in bad ways on
plants
and animals, so some
people
say it is very late to resolve
this
effect because human have many daily routines and some families hunting to sell.
For example
, the family have
a
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camping, and they build
c
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amp near the forest. There are
activities
like hunting, fishing or lighting a fire. Every activity affects
to
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animals and
plants
because hunting and fishing, they must
to
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kill animals that they can catch.
Moreover
, several
people
have a job
such
as hunters, fishmongers and carpenters, so it is impossible that
people
can solve
this
trouble.
This
is a reason why human think that it is too late to solve problems.
On the other hand
, others argue that if governments have a
rule
,
people
will do and it can solve
this
trouble because every
rule
always
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punishments
,
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if
people
do not do in measure.
For Instance
, in the city, has many problems about economic, so governments establish some rules to improve
this
situation, and some cities if
people
break a
rule
, they will not only paid much money but
also
imprison too, so a large group of
people
afraid about punishments, they follow a
rule
and
this
method makes
this
problem gone.
Hence
,
this
is the reason why
people
think that if they have an effective standard, they will do
this
situation better than before. To sum up, many
activities
have negative ways in economics like
plants
and animal species. Human thinks that they can not solve anything, but others argue that if they have a strong position and
rule
, they will improve
this
effect.
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