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Nowadays, many people think that we should live with climate change instead of preventing it. Do you agree or not?

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In the
last
 few decades, global warming has been a constant cause of concern for the world. Since everyone posses a different perception to deal with
this
 rising problem, several individual advice that one should adopt these environmental
changes
instead
 of putting efforts to protect them.
However
, I have an opposite point of view. In
this
 essay, we will understand the necessity of preventing the eco-system from
such
changes
.
Firstly
, constant variations in the
weather
 conditions can create environmental imbalance.
That is
 to say, the continuous
changes
 in the climate can disturb atmospheric components and, would thereby give rise to situations which can be hazardous for the environment.
For example
, unexpected dry
weather
 in the winter season can cause the phenomenon like melting of snow that can lead to a flood.
Also
, damaged caused to the forest while thunder and lightening is another significant example of environmental disbalance.
Secondly
, extreme climatic
changes
 can lead to depletion of natural resources.
In other words
, sometimes the living species can not adapt to the sudden
changes
 and may lose their life.
Also
, these conditions can cause the extinction of resources
such
 as water and nutrition from the soil.
For instance
, in the summer season, we have observed that many water bodies like rivers and lakes become dry
as a result
 of extremely dry
weather
. To conclude, since variation in the
weather
 condition can affect the living as well as the natural resources, I disagree with the suggestion of accepting these
changes
 and we should,
therefore
, take appropriate measures to protect the nature from these environmental threats.
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Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

You should use complex sentences in your writing, but it does not mean that you should try to make all of our sentences complex.

‘Complex’ sentences are not actually very complex; they are just two or more simple sentences put together. Putting them together makes the essay more coherent and cohesive.

Examples:

I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • climate change
  • prevent
  • adaptation
  • mitigation
  • cope with
  • effects
  • shift
  • mindset
  • lifestyle
  • balance
  • invest
  • research
  • technology
  • crucial
  • education
  • awareness
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