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Some educationalists say that every child should be taught how to play a musical instrument. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

#educationalists #child #instrument
In recent years, there are a lot of controversies regarding
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 from early ages. In my opinion, it is one of way to improve
children
's abilities and
parents
 could recognize their
children
's interests through the learning musical
instrument
.
Therefore
, I absolutely agree with
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First
 of all, according to some of
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ducationalists has claimed that
children
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instrument
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brain
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 because flexible hands help to develop our
brain
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 to be played by hands.
Brain
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 if
people
 start to be taught from their youth.
Secondly
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eenager could belong to one of
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ommunities and meet others who have
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ame interest in
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aste of music and interesting
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instrument
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elationship with community members and play together. It is a way to acquire how to communicate with others and play as a team.
Lastly
,
people
 believe that
parents
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instrument
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nstrument, his or her
parents
 will support them to enjoy the kid's interest.
On the other hand
, some
people
 have said that
children
 should be taught and had more active classes or lessons for their health than learning how to play a musical
instrument
. It is true and cannot be ignored.
However
, in modern society,
people
 think that playing a musical
instrument
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. To sum up, many
parents
 and
people
 have different views about learning a musical
instrument
. Both
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ideas may be right and have different benefit.
However
, teaching how to play an
instrument
 from young will bring more benefits
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 our
children
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brain
 development.
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