You should spend about 40 minutes on this task. Write about the following topic: Many people believe that zoos have no purpose in today’s world and should be closed. What problems do zoos bring? What are the alternatives to zoos if they are closed? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience. Write at least 250 words.

There is no doubt that a

zoo

is not the ideal place for an animal to live in it.In recent years, more and more people have believed that the existence of the

zoo

is useless,

thus

it should be shut down.

This

essay will discuss the problems associated with

this

situation and purpose alternatives to an animal park in case of closing it. One of the most significant

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oo is the negative change

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animal behaviour.

This

is because

animals

feel that they are captive in their cells, which negatively affects their mental state. To illustrate

this

, some species

such

as lion and monkey become wild and fierce toward humans when someone is trying to feed them.

Therefore

, by closing the animal parks, governments should organize trips to

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wild life

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so that people can watch

animals

in their natural

hibatiants

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habitants

.

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solution will help

animals

to return to their normal life safely and gives people

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pportunity to watch closely their behaviour.

Furthermore

, the death of many

animals

has indicated that

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oo is responsible for these accidents.

This

happened because some of the staff

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don't

have experience in taking care of

animals

.

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, If the birds do not get its food

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three times daily, there is a high chance that they may die. The main cause behind

this

case is that some of the employees are younger adults who do not have any information about the eating habits of

this

bird. A perfect substitute to a

zoo

, public authorities could encourage citizens to join species observation groups

such

as birds or

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dolphins

dolphin

observatory.

This

will result in protecting

animals

from extinction and faulty death. Inconclusion,

animals

behaviours and their decease have been regarded as major problems of

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oo. If a

zoo

was closed, there would be many alternatives to

this

place

such

as

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trips and

animals

observatory.