Many people believe that zoos have no purpose in today’s world and should be closed. What problems do zoos bring? What are the alternatives to zoos if they are closed? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
There is no doubt that a
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is not the ideal place for an animal to live in it.In recent years, more and more people have believed that the existence of the Use synonyms
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situation and purpose alternatives to an animal park in case of closing it.
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, some species Linking Words
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Therefore
, by closing the animal parks, governments should organize trips to Linking Words
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wild life
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wildlife
animals
in their natural Use synonyms
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habitants
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animals
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, public authorities could encourage citizens to join species observation groups Use synonyms
such
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dolphins
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will result in protecting Linking Words
animals
from extinction and faulty death.
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animals
behaviours and their decease have been regarded as major problems of Use synonyms
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a
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trips and Correct your spelling
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