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Many working people get little or no exercise either during the working day or in their free time, and have health problems as a result. Why do man working people not get enough exercise? What can be done about this problem?

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Nowadays, a lot of
people
 have health problems due to not considering enough
time
 for exercise. There are some reasons
such
 as long working
hours
 and the fact that it is not important to them,
although
 there are solutions. The main reason
people
 avoid daily
exercises
 is that the working
hours
 are very long, or they have duties at home.
As a result
, they are too tired or busy
for
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 any physical activity. Take a working mother as an example, their main job begins after working
hours
; they need to prepare meals, care for their children, and do things around the house, therefor they prefer to rest in their free
time
instead
 of doing
exercises
.
In addition
, many
people
 do not believe
exercises
 to be a daily activity.
As a result
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,
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they do not consider any
time
 for it in their daily or weekly activities.
However
, there are some solutions to
this
 problem.
Firstly
, employers can consider a gap during working
hours
 for employees to go to a nearby gym to do some
exercises
.
Therefore
, all employees not only get more productive and fresh for the day, they
also
 become healthier. It is
also
 the responsibility of the government to increase public awareness
i
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nform individuals about the importance of regular
exercises
. In conclusion, it is evident that some reasons
such
 as lack of
time
, and less importance of daily
exercises
 to individuals
is
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are
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 associated with
people
 preferring not to have any daily
exercises
. There are many solutions that can be considered by employers to avoid serious health problems.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • sedentary
  • physical activity
  • motivation
  • interest
  • stress
  • fatigue
  • exhaustion
  • fitness facilities
  • outdoor spaces
  • technology
  • sedentary leisure activities
  • awareness
  • importance
  • health
  • unhealthy lifestyle choices
  • poor diet
  • smoking
  • workplace culture
  • work-life balance
  • time constraints
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