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Every country should have a free-health service, even if this means that the latest medical treatments may not be available through the service because they are too expensive. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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Health is wealth and
that is
 why every country should provide a free-health
service
 regardless of its availability to medical treatments because they are expensive to get. In my view, I may agree that free
service
 should be given,
however
, somewhat I disagree to some extent.
First
 and foremost,providing free-health
service
 in any country is beneficial for the reason that it enables the low average citizens to acquire medical
services
.
For example
, a farmer that does not have
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medical insurance it is difficult to get treatment,
therefore
,a free medical
service
 is of great help.For some countries like the Philippines ,there is the PCSO that offers help to
people
 who cannot afford to pay the medical bills.Certainly,having
this
 program would be of great help to the
people
.
On the other hand
,there are some points that would be not so beneficial if there will be an influx of
people
 that would require free medical
services
.In
this
 case,there should be
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imit as well in giving free
services
.
For instance
,the health ministry must implement
such
 rules in order to equally provide medical treatments ,so basically,implementing certain
criterias
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criteria
 that should be given to the one's deserving or who needs it most. To conclude,in my own opinion,I agree that every country must have rules and policies in providing free medical
services
 to all the
people
,
although
 it is not easy to get the most latest medical treatments due to its high cost but to be able to create a good program,there is a better chance to provide help to all the
people
 who are in need.
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