Each year, the crime rate increases. What are the causes of crime and what could be done to prevent this rise in criminal activity?
In
this
century, many people
suffer from the number of crimes
in the society; this
number higher than the past decade. There are many reasons for this
high crime rate
, I will discuss that in this
essay and present some solutions for this
problem.
To begin
with, the main reason of the increasing of the crime rate
is that many people
now under the poverty line and that encourage them to brack the law and do violence to another one because of the needs of money. In developing countries, for example
, the number of homeless is high and still increase because of the economic recession, and that the main cause of the spreading of crimes
. Thus
, that is
clear now the impoverished people
make crimes
to survive in this
unfair world.
At the same time, the solution to solve this
problem is really easy, and that is
the government should provide the minimum range of income to people
under the poverty line. In other words
, that means government and charities communities could provide the basic facilities to their society. In Norway, for instance
, that is
clear there is not any difference in between the social levels and anyone there has the same service facility with neglecting the difference the salary. Therefore
, the crimes
rate
can be decreased if society focus to solve this
problem.
In conclusion, the rate
of crimes
now higher than the past and that because many people
suffer to live above the poverty line, also
to solve this
kind of problems government should work more to provide services for all residents.Submitted by yasseryousefabozaid on
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