Some people think it would be a good idea for schools to teach every young person how to be a good parent. Do you agree or disagree with this opinion? Describe the skills a person needs to be a good parent.

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Many consider that it could be an amazing idea to study parenting to adolescent at academics. I disagree with

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notion and will discuss in below paragraphs along with skills needed to be a good parent. The academic study must be

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riority for children and teaching parenting is unreasonable as It needs more patience and maturity to understand that deep relation.

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, The depth of relation will not be understood by a youngster whose priority is different at that age.

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, For accepting and fulfilling their future responsibility one has to be successful in his life which needs full concentration on academics rather than future relationship study. It requires

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bundance of love and cares to understand.

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Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

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Lexical resource: 7.0

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Grammatical Range: 7.0

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Task Achievement: 4.0

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