Many processed foods and ready-meals contain preservatives and chemicals Do you think the advantages outweigh the disadvantages ?

Pre prepared
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food
items contain chemicals to keep them for a longer period.The merit of using canned
food
is it saves preparation
time
for working
people
while eating pre-packed
food
regularly risks
people
health,
this
essay will discuss
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dvantages and
disadvantages
and why the advantages dominate
disadvantages
. Nowadays the world is rapidly changing and
people
became extremely busy in their day to day life.Eating fast
food
can save
l
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ot of
time
for those who go to work as they have no
time
to spend in the kitchen .
For example
, those starts working early hours may need to rush to work .In
this
case ,
people
often consume
food
from fast
food
outlets or
food
courts available near their workplace.
This
saves their energy which they can spend that
time
and energy for other chores.
On the other hand
,
people
may develop serious health issues
such
as high blood pressure,cancer etc due to consumption of ready-made
food
.
For instance
,eating Parata every day may cause heart problems because of
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reserved oil they used.
Therefore
eating,
food
with preservatives weighs
disadvantages
. To summarize,many
food
containsalthough
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contains although
there are some
disadvantages
of eating pre-packed
food
,consuming in limited proportion as needed may save a lot of
time
for those who are working daily .
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A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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