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Many children are encouraged by their parents to get a part-time job in their free time. What are the advantages and disadvantages of this to children of doing so? Give reasons for your answer and write a suitable example

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Earning extra In an early age becoming a popular trend. In Leisure period a lot of kids are motivated to do the extra small
work
 by their guidance.
This
 essay will discuss both cons and pros. It is commonly believed that to meet all the expense of home and supporting parents every member has to play his role to fulfil their needs, and
this
 can only happen by doing extra
work
 in the form of part-time
work
.
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, to achieve any goal set by the organization is only possible by teamwork. Everyone has to do
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ittle bit effort from out of their comfort zone.
Although
, student need extra money to pay their semester fee or they wanted to get high education which is far away for
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oor parent.so that they compel to do another
work
 to meet
such
 expenditures. Others argue that it would be a violation of
labor
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 law to pursuits children to do
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xtra job. Indulging into these kinds of activities kids can lose their study time as well as may suffer health issues.
this
 is the prime time of children growth not only physical but
also
 cognitive.
This
 will help them to make a bright career in the upcoming days. The Government should take a measurement against child labour and give scholarship to these students. To conclude, in my opinion
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kids are intelligent and have the ability to grip things quickly we should not engage them extra-curriculum actives like part-time jobs.
This
 is the best time to study and put all your energy to make their future endeavour
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