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The best way to understand other cultures is to work for a multinational organization. To what extent to you agree or disagree?

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Working for a multinational company is the finest
way
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 to learn about different
cultures
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.
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 working for
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 a organiazation provides the opportunity to mix with
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 from variety of cultural backgrounds,I would argue that
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 is not necessarily the best
way
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 to learn about other
cultures
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. There is no doubt that for some individual's,working for a multinational organisation will enhance their understanding of other culture.The
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 reason is that in a multinational one can learn about customs and traditions of other countries through mixing with
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 from different backgrounds who
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 in the company or in liasing with colleagues abroad.Exposure to other languages is
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 likely,something that gives a much greater depth of understanding of a culture.There may
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 be the chance to relocate to a job in another country,which would mean complete immersion in that culture.
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,there are a number of reasons that it is not necessarily the best
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.
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,there is no guarantee that you will be a person who gets
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 exposure to other
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 as it depends on your position within the company.Not all employees have roles where they regularly mix with other
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,there are many other excellent ways to achieve
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 a goal.
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:-many individual's these days travel the world,and
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 is an opportunity to meet and spend time with
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 from other countries.It is
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 possible to voluntary
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 with organisations and charities that
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 in other countries,something that would mean you a mix of
people
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 rather than just those who
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 in companies. In conclusion,despite the potential ways in which working for a multinational organization can result in contact with
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 from other
cultures
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.I believe that it cannot be assumed it is the only best
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 as there are other options to do
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