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Nowadays families move to different countries for work. Some people think it has a negative effect on children, while others disagree. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

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With the world becoming a globalised economy, more and more people are migrating to different countries. While one section of the society believes that the
children
 of people moving abroad will have a negative impact, others do not agree with the view.
This
 essay will discuss both the views in the forthcoming paragraphs. One one side, a child moving abroad while leaving all his or her closed ones behind may make him/her lonely which may affect his health physically and mentally.
In addition
,
children
 already have so much pressure
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 their studies, moving into an alien environment will put additional pressure on them of learning a new language.
Moreover
, the child may find it difficult to adjust to the new environment in terms of culture, food, religion, weather.
Also
, new
syallabus
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 and curriculum will become a hurdle from him/her to adjust to the new place. Some people leave their
children
 behind while moving to a new place. These youngsters may feel deprived of the love and care that they used to get from their parents.
On the other hand
,
firstly
,
school goers
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 will be able to learn the new language and understand the culture of the new place which will help them in their career in the coming years.
Secondly
,
children
 will get access to
world class
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 schools and curriculum that will help them to build their future.
Thirdly
, they will
also
 get
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etter lifestyle, greater safety and better health.
Moreover
,
children
 of migrated parents already have experience of handling pressure and will be able to perform better when exposed to it in their job environment. To sum up, I reckon that that moving to a new country may impose some initial challenges for the family and
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 for the
children
 but the benefits outweigh the disadvantages of moving to a new country.
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