Some people think that job satisfaction is more important than job security. Others think that people cannot expect to enjoy a job and that having a permanent job is more important. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

The most public consider finding a

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able to give them satisfaction and happiness valuable than a

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for a long-term relationship. I partially agree with

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statement considering that there are relevant reasons where the person does not have an option to wait until they can find their dream business. Some community who already built their families usually prefer to have work security because at the end of each month they have a lot of expenses to pay especially when they have children.

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, in some cases as younger folk, where they have just started to build their own career and, most of them are willing to plan and wait until they can find their favourite place.

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assion to do when you are still younger because you will probably spend most of the time in your life working. Unless you have chosen a good profession able to help you to build your wealth prematurely. A good example and moment are when the younger public is still living with their parents and, they have someone to support their expenses. Like

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, they can wait until finding the dream work. Meantime, it is very difficult for someone who already built their families to have

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insecurity work. As I have heard from my father an adult population can wait until you have money to buy a pair of shoes or clothes to them, but since you have kids it will not be possible anymore. In

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kind of situation, it would be much better to have a secure

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. To summarize, in my opinion

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if you do not have money enough to support you or your family for

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long term, security

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will fit much better. But everyone knows your real moment and when it is time to move forward.