Countries should restrict foreign companies from opening offices and factories in order to protect local businesses. Do you agree or disagree? Give reasons and specific examples to explain your answer.

In an era of globalization, it is common to have an office and factories started in a foreign land. Some people believe in doing so it hampers local

business

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, I strongly support the ideology as

this

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enables good competition for creating better

products

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/services and eliminate monopolies in the industries.

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with, when a foreign company is opening an office or factories it brings many benefits along with them. These benefits include advance technology, better

products

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and job opportunities. If

such

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initiatives are not encouraged the customers are left with inferior and out of date

products

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as they have no other options to chose from.

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, Detroit city was amongst the top flourishing metropolitan as it was American automaker's manufacturing hub. For long, these companies developed cars with high emission and poor efficiency mechanism. Until competition struck from Japanese automakers by introducing hybrid cars that were low in emission and great efficiency.

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ahead, A

market

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place offering

products

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only from local

business

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can create monopolies. It can be intentional or lack of supply chain programs. Local

business

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is small in size and

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can afford to capture the entire nation's

market

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. A foreign company can successfully expand its product line as they have the funds to do so.

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, A small scale

business

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in India, manufacturing medical equipment will never be able to supply to its counterparts of the

market

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as transport cost can increase the cost price of the product and the customer will have no option to buy it.

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, a well established foreign company, P&G, has set up multiple factories in India for better reach of the

market

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and cheap

products

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. In conclusion, a nation having policies that invite foreign industries to open facilities inland can be thought as a better thriving marketplace and ensuring customers are benefited by good

products

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and have a healthy competition with local

business

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for advancing technologies.

Shashank Sharma

Jan 27, 2021

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