Some say that it would be better if the majority of employees worked from home instead of traveling to a work place every day. Do you think the advantages of working from home outweigh the disadvantages?

"Employees" are the key factor of success for any successfully functioning organisation and they

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play a vital role in the workplace development and multicultural place. I disagree with the above claim that as the disadvantage outweigh the advantage, and in the following essay shall submit my

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claim in my point of view.

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has advanced so much that any work we do is done by connecting to internet and staff would be able to log-in to their personal accounts and take remote desktop connection in order to

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the issue, while they are sitting in the

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is in

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office

and along with his

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he would be able to interact with them. whereas, if he is in

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interaction

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no productivity.

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team-member is working from

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they would not be following the

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on the

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to their accounts and so there is any monitoring in the server

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like they would be working

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, working from

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would result in serious health issue because they would be facing monitor for

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xtended period of hours would result in eye-sight problems, and would

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result in obesity.

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resent scenario COVID-19 which resulted in

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lobal pandemic, and

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now working from help, which resulted in unnecessary buying of

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items and utility bills. In

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orkplace more productive every one should be

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working

in the same place, as

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would help them to grow skill and interact with their project leader. In a nutshell, based on the claims that have been discussed . I disagree that

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ajority employee should go to

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ffice rather working from

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there are more disadvantage rather than advantages.