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Write a letter to the manager of the Lost and Found department of the railway regarding the luggage you accidentally left on the train. In your letter, give details of your train trip describe the luggage you left on the train say what actions you want him/her to take

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Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing
this
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 letter to enquire about a piece of luggage that I have accidentally
forgot
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left
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in
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on
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 one of your trains. On 17th February, I took the Bold Train – 2145A from Izmir to Ankara, and my seat number was 31A in the second coach. Unfortunately, in the hustle and bustle of
the
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leaving the train, I was distracted and forgot to pick
one
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up one
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 of my bags which was located under my seat.
This
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 is a quite big leather bag with two black pockets on the front.
Due to
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 the name card
that is
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 attached to the upper zip, I suppose it would be easier to find. Since my laptop and its entails, like my mouse and various cables, are in
this
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 bag; I should find it as soon as possible.
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, there is a blue notebook
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 my Air pods in the front pockets.
As a result
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, I would highly appreciate it if you could check the Lost and Found department, in order to figure out whether it has been
founded
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found
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 or not. So that if
this
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 bag is in one of your safety lockers, I come and collect it. Thank you for your cooperation on
this
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 matter in advance, I look forward to hearing from you. Yours faithfully Tina Rose

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task achievement
Consider providing a more detailed description of your luggage to enhance clarity.
coherence and cohesion
Try to ensure each paragraph sticks to a single, clear idea for better coherence.
writing tone
The letter maintains a polite and formal tone appropriate for the context.
task achievement
You clearly specified the date of travel and train details, which is helpful for the manager.
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