Some people think that the government is responsible for the rise in obesity in childer, while others think it is the fault of the parents.discuss both views and give your opionin

Being obese, itself very poisonous for every person as it carries more disease and other life issues and nowadays it is really common among our youngster. Some people think that the

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is responsible while I agree with those who feel that it is the fault of the guardians who take care of their

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. On one hand, some people might argue that the

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should take a strict note on

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issue. The main reasons for overweight

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the availability of fast food and packed food. The

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can easily force fast-food restaurants that they should not provide their services to the kids or without any superiority of family member.

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, the kids are not allowed to eat without their elder permission.

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, the

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should think of rising tax to packed food available to markets, which means it is now difficult to buy for every ordinary person who never thinks of sending his

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to any gym or sports facility.

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, in my opinion,

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is the most important factor for

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aretaker.

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think it is important to give freedom to their

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, it is as equally necessary to keep eye on them.

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should know where their adolescent spending money.

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, they can guide them

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what is beneficial for their

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and what they have to eat and on what timings. Even worse, most

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in society never think of sending their

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to any physical activities. In the past, schools playgrounds are enough for students but now most schools hardly have any grounds, which means that it is making

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ifficult for students to get involved in any kind of physical activities. My best argument is the technology that makes every other person lazy and couch potato. While I concede that the involvement of technology is vital for today's world, still I feel that it totally ruin physical

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of a

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because

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do not care about how long or for what time their

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involved in mobile or online games. In conclusion,

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the

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need to forcefully implement some rules, in the

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of a

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his caretaker plays the major and foremost role.

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, on balance, I believe

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should keep eye on their

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routines and activities.