To reduce congestion, people should to be provided with free bicycles. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Never before
people
face the issue of increasing traffics jams due to the high number of cars. The one
way
to decrease congestion is to introduced free bicycles to citizens. From my point of views, introducing
free cycling
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as a
way
of commuting is right
way
not only reduce
traffic
jam but
also
to show
people
how many hours they waste in
traffic
and how
this
option will solve parking issue. Having bicycles available around the
city
at no cost
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might motivate some
people
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se
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icycle as
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ode of transportation to cover shorter distances.
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,
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yclist will not only avoid wasting their time in a
traffic
jam
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but
also
it will reduce the number of cars on the road during the rush hours. The pilot project of free
city
bikes was introduced in Victoria, BC by the government of the
city
. Most
people
were interested
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e part of
this
project,
however
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not everyone was ready to
use
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icycle to reach their destination during the rainy weather. The final result shows during the normal weather condition the congestion on the road were reduced by 7%, whereas only 1.5%
traffic
reduction appeared during the rainy weather. Not all drivers might afford to park their car in private parking due to the cost, whereas the free parking is challengeable to find out. Providing easy access to free
city
bikes parking might shift the
users
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mind to
use
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icycle to commute rather than
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ar. Solved issues with parking will
reduces
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the stress level among users and promote to
use
a healthier option to move around.
For example
, Google company in California introduced to
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employees an opportunity to travel to work by bike with
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free parking. Most
people
started
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ome to the job on time and in a good mood as they stopped stressing about the parking. The
traffic
jam was reduced dramatically in
this
area,
therefore
showing that
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ncreasing number of cyclist might reduce congestion on the area. Introducing cycling as an alternative
way
to commute on a short distance might effect on overall
traffic
reducing and solving parking issues.
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