Write about the following topic: Some people believe that they should be able to keep all the money they earn, and should not have to pay tax to the state. To what extent do you agree or disagree? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own experience or knowledge.

Taxes

are essential for the growth of the country. A group of individuals believe that they should keep all their earnings and should not have any obligation

in paying

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to pay

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the

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taxes

to the

government

. I personally disagree with

this

notion and firmly believe that citizens are entitled to pay

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taxes

for the betterment of the country and for an enhanced way of living.

To begin

with,

taxes

are used by the

government

for developing

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their nations.

Taxes

are allocated to various kinds of essential matters.

Firstly

, they are used to develop infrastructure

facilities

like roads and highways, improving or replacing existing transportation units.

Secondly

,

taxes

are utilised

for providing

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residents with decent medical services and education

facilities

.

For example

, in countries like Canada and Australia, the citizens enjoy free medical and education

facilities

as they contribute to the

government

in

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the form

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of

taxes

.

Last

but not least, the

government

spends huge

amount

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amounts

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collected through

taxes

on military services and

facilities

for maintaining the political stability and harmony of the country. And

then

,

people

should

also

look that

taxes

they have paid

,

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will

also

be beneficial for themselves sooner or later.Some of the funds collected by the

government

are used for retirement funds.

For instance

,

people

above 60 years of age who find

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to secure a job with minimum wages can rely on these funds.

Therefore

,

people

should not keep all their earnings to themselves and must comply

on

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paying the

taxes

to the

government

.

To conclude

, I do not agree that

people

should have a hold of all the money they earn as

taxes

are the primary source for the

government

for building the nation and ensuring that its citizen leads an enhanced lifestyle.