In a number of developing countries, the quality of air and water is declining day by day. State the problems due to this? Discuss the possible solutions for dealing with these problems.

In

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modern era of industrialization, especially in growing countries

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a compromise is being made with the

quality

air and water.

Moreover

, the grade of

such

resources is falling gradually.

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problems

associated with it and

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ffective solution to control them. To commence with,

the advancing nations industrialization and transportation

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the industrialization and transportation of the advancing nation

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are growing significantly which results in uncontrolled pollution and

hence

inducing

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lethora of detrimental effects on the

quality

of resources.

Firstly

, the grade of

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ir we inhale and the water we drink are all compromise with the need of advancement which results in our own suffering.

Furthermore

,

this

brings a potential theft

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human

life

by introducing numerous

diseases

.

For instance

,

diseases

like asthma, heart

problems

, skin cancer and many water-borne

diseases

are a part of human

life

and we are living on medication to deter the effects of these disorders.

Secondly

, the industrial waste containing chemicals which are being disposed

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in to

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rivers

in turn

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affects

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marine

life

. The evidence of

this

can be seen on the beaches where dead fishes are found.

On the other hand

, there are numerous solutions to deal with these

problems

.

Firstly

, planting more and more trees can cope up with the declining

quality

of air which in turn reduce the

diseases

we are suffering from. In

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contrast,

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overnment should spread awareness about the importance

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these resources.

Secondly

,

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overnment should implement strict laws on industries so that disposal of waste can be done in a controlled way.

For instance

, the

quality

of waste should be monitored before disposing

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them. In conclusion,

problems

of

this

includes

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theft

on

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human and marine

life

.

However

, if

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roposed solution came

in to

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action, we can deal with these pressing issues effectively.