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Computer games is very popular in all ages and nations. Parent think it has little educational Value and more harmful effects. What is your opinion about this? Give example based on your own experience.

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With the advance of technology computer games' popularity started to skyrocket.
However
,some controversy remains regarding
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 matter.Parents might
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argue
agree
 that,negative effects derived from playing and it is just
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aste of time.As a gamer myself I will present some contrary point about
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,explaining why they help us to develop our skills.
Firstly
,videogames
presents
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 a person with
neumerous
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numerous
puzzels
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,challenges and all sorts of situations. These aspects might develop our strong critical thinking skills which may come to help in our life as well. By having several challenges before a person can feel more
confidance
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confidence
confident
 and faced a lot of hardships later on in life.
Besides
, It is a great source to practice some new languages. As a Bengali speaker, they have created a platform for me to help learning vocabularies in English and Spanish.
Secondly
, videogames not only
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 our skills as I mentioned above
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 but
also
 we can consider it as
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. Many of us are connected with internet,
thus
 people
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interacts
interact
 with each other all around the world.
This social bondings
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 might help us in different aspects.
For instance
, it helps us to develop our teamwork knowledge.
On the other hand
, gaming has
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 very common all around the world. Who
do
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 not involve with
this
 may
deprived
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from
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 new technology.
For example
, a child who
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 not
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interact
interest
intersect
 with
this
 entertainment
titels
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titles
 might
l
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eft from his or her friend circle due to lack of
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 of common chat
toppics
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topics
. In conclusion, games are
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valuable resources as a means of personal development, entertainment and
strethengthed
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strengthed
 of social bondings.
This
 should not be seen as a negative sign. After the analysis of
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 essay parents should understand the betterment of
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ame and adopt our new technology because games are coming to stay.
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