News stories on TV and in newspapers are often accompanied by pictures. Some people say that these pictures are more effective than words. What is your opinion about this?

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It is an ongoing debate that
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are more effective than
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in
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stories on TV and in newspapers. My opinion somewhat contradicts
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not totally. While I understand why many people say
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are more effective, I will explain my stance of the topic in the following paragraphs in
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, in the delivery of any type of
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, be it entertainment
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, politics, geography etc.,
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tell a good enough story.
Any one
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who
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across
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whether
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listening or reading can get enough information on the topic of discussion.
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, you cannot get a grasp of the story by simply looking at photos.
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, you will be left with tons of questions or be forced to draw conclusions that may be false.
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, nowadays, it is rather detrimental to depend on
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we see especially on the internet. There are many methods of photo manipulation, as it is popularly said, "don't believe all you see on the internet". With
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, we could come across different
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articles on a particular topic and compare, contrast and draw personal opinions from the data you have
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. It cannot be gainsaid that for stellar storytelling or
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reporting, employing the use of
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and
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makes your story more captivating.
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, in my opinion, is why many people believe that
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pictures
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are more effective than
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. The fact is the
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on their own will not have that effect and
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is why for humdinger pieces,
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should be accompanied by
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narration as it helps the audience connect better.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • empathize
  • instantaneous comprehension
  • irrefutable evidence
  • transcend language barriers
  • overreliance
  • oversimplification
  • misinformation
  • desensitizing
  • nuance
  • in-depth analysis
  • symbiotic relationship
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