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Most of people think that the truth should be objective rather than subjective when it comes to the news. Do you think all news is true? what is the function of a newspaper?

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An impressive number of individuals argue that the subjectivity of the
news
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 is not acceptable and that the
information
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 should be represented exclusively objectively. I am entirely sure that in our globalised world the possibility of receiving not accurate
news
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 has markedly increased.
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, the mass media including newspapers
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 has a significant role
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seperete
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separate
 wrong
information
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 from the truth and present reliable facts to the public.
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 with, nowadays people should be rather suspicious
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 the
news
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 they receive from the media. The main reason is the fact that during the
last
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 decades the sources of
information
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 have experienced a rapid increase. In detail, due to the Internet and
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social networking sites, any kind of
information
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 is now available for anyone. The absence of a controlling organization and the impunity led to a situation where the lie and the truth have been assimilated.
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, almost two months ago in Twitter
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the official page of Defence of Armenia was falsified, and the citizens were receiving fake
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oreign policy of the state during the recent regional war. In
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 complicated conditions, the newspapers can receive the important role of purification of
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. They should take
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responsibility to verify any
information
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. The events should be represented without additional emotions and objectively. To the best of my knowledge, the authors should
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refrain
retain
 from their personal positions and avoid
misleadig
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misleading
 the readers.
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, the newspaper can be a reliable source of
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. To illustrate, the stuff of the "Times" includes a group of professionals who are involved in the actions of specification of the
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.
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, all articles are being highly inspected in order to avoid any expression of subjectivity. To conclude, people should be more attentive before accepting the
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 received from the mass media as
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truth.
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, in case of some appropriate measures some of the sources of
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,
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, the newspapers can be more reliable
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • objective reporting
  • subjective interpretation
  • media bias
  • misinformation
  • journalistic integrity
  • editorial standards
  • fact-checking
  • watchdog role
  • public opinion
  • newsworthy
  • ethical journalism
  • credible sources
  • press freedom
  • sensationalism
  • media literacy
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