You are unhappy about a plan to make your local airport bigger and increase the number of flights. You live near the airport

Dear Sir/ Madam, I am writing
this
letter regarding an article published in your newspaper on 21st January 2021, heading plan about local
airport
size increasing and an extra number of flights frequency.
This
article makes the residents
nearby
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the
airport
become more aggravative. I am a resident near the
airport
. The
airport
is
on
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only 15
min
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15-minute
walkable distance. The people living
nearby
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the
airport
are facing
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an
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utter noise of local fights and traffic congestion
problem
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every day.
However
, the
elder
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and
the
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kids
having
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a
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crucial hearing
problem
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.
Due to
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flight noise sleep
also
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disturbed. Sadly, many people from
this
area
facing
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a sleeping issue. It will
harmful
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for
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their health,
also
their
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other health issues
would
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occur. I am really afraid that the expansion of the
airport
reduces
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the size of
playground
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and park which
is
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are
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under construction. The traffic
condition
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conditions
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would be worse than now.
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would
be
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to
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decline
the
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standard of living of residents in
this
area. Considering all these negative consequences, I strongly
aginst
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with the plan
of expanding
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the
airport
and increase the number of flights. I would appreciate it if you would publish
this
negative side of the plan which
initiated to
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likely caused. Thank you in
advanced
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. Yours faithfully, Surekha Kamble.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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