Some people think parents should supervise their children’s activities closely, while others believe children should have more freedom. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Parents

are always overprotective to their

children

in the early stages of their childhood. Few of them like to monitor their

children

activities closely and guide them

accordingly

, while others want them to be independent in their journey. In

this

essay, I will explore both the arguments and I will discuss with examples why I tend to agree with the latter view. While the

children

upbringing is closely supervised by their

parents

.

This

allows the

children

to get the guidance, whenever they intend to make mistakes.

For instance

, most of the

parents

in Indian culture are very protective of their

children

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upbringing. They'll closely supervise their

children

activities and

accordingly

mould them to whatever good habit it should be.

Furthermore

,

this

most of the time make the bonding between

children

and

parents

strong, but at the same time vulnerable to the situations where they need to take important decisions quickly in the absence of their

parents

.

On the other hand

,

children

should be left independent to make their own choices. With

this

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they would be able to learn from their own mistakes.

This

would

also

make them street smart, and proactive about the real-world problems. It will eventually make them confident to anything that comes their way. To conclude, monitoring of the

children

activities closely makes them dependent on their

parents

.

However

, they should be allowed complete freedom to solve their own problems and make their mark. Being a child myself, I work best when

i

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work independently and

this

makes me more creative and confident.