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It is better to eat food which is produced locally by small farmers, rather than food produced by “factory farming” and transported long distances. what are the advantage and disadvantage ?

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Food
 is a basic necessity for everyone. A certain segment of society believes that
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nowadays
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mostly
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 individuals consuming
food
 from
farms
 that are away from them. Whilst
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 believes that it would be better for
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nvironment and economy if individuals consume
food
 from local
farms
.
However
,advantages completely outweigh
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isadvantages there. I would like to explain it in
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pcoming paragraph.
To begin
 with,the
first
 and foremost reason most of the individuals are working person so, they don’t have enough time in their busy schedule to buy
food
 from distant
farms
. Local
farms
food
 is easily available to them.
In addition
 to
this
, they can complain to
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arm owner if there is an issue with
food
.
Hence
,
food
 from local
farms
 is better for the
conomy
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economy
come
.
Moreover
, another segment of society says that
food
 from distant
farms
 is good for them. They think
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 local
farms
 sell their products at very uneconomical prices.
In addition
 to
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they think, local
farms
food
 is not well prepared.
Thus
, they say we should get
food
 from distant
farms
. In conclusion,after analysing all the aspects,we would like to conclude that
food
 from local
farms
 not only easily available
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but
also
 it is better for
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nvironment and economy.
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