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Some people believe that the fast pace and stress of modern life is having a negative effect on families. To what extent do you agree or disagree

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Some
people
 think that modern life is too much
fussy
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 and
this
 fact has a negative influence on families.
This
 essay agrees with
this
 statement because nowadays most of
m
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odern
people
 have no
time
 for their family members due to the great workload and
also
 often take out their anger of them. Most of the modern
people
 are
workholics
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workaholics
workaholic
 and spend little
time
 with their spouses. Married couples nowadays
are mostly have
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 high career expectations and spend a great deal of
time
 working in offices and other establishments. Their tight schedules
does
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 not allow them to spend even their spare
time
 with their
husbunds
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husbands
husband's
 or
wifes
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wives
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 and children that may result in divorce and distrust to parents from the part of
y
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oung generation.
For example
, a recent Cambridge University survey found that
a
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52% of British married couples filed for divorce in 2019 because of the lack of work-life balance. Modern
people
 often tend to take out a tention and
strees
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stress
 of
this
 life on their spouses and children. It is obvious that individuals may often be in bad mood because of their work, problems with public transport or even accidents in supermarkets. By facing
such
 negative situations every day,
people
 become extremely stressful and anxious and start
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take out
such
 negative
enegy
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energy
 on their siblings that has a negative impact on family relationship. According to the Economist, almost 80% of modern
people
 have ever had family issues because of
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igh level of
tention
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tension
 and anxiety. In conclusion, a
hastling
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hustling
hassling
 life has a negative effect on the family lives of modern
people
 because they almost have no
time
 for their siblings due to their workloads and often take out their negative emotions on their
wifes
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wives
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, husbands and children.
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